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A Thought About Spirits
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A Thought About Spirits |
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Iron Wolf Junior Member
since 2004-01-20
Posts 23 |
He sits upon high On a throne of celestial fragrance Doing what he will With what he has Which is all that is. Takes the time to see He has prayers made unto him Whether he listens Is down to you And your sins. Still he sits up In the high throne of Heaven Surely he must begin to tire Of rule over all, for the time that he has? Surely, Creation must have made weary his powers, Is that why he made angelic life? To do his bidding To listen to and solve his every qualm And to aid in his behemoth task? Which selected thoughts Are the ones that race Through all time And everywhere possible And adhere to his wisened mind? Which few are they? Or does he experience them all? Does he have that capacity? The Almighty. So as he sits each day and night Watching over his vast lands As the celestial bodies fly on by Does he envision them bettered? Does he plan the future of the world? Is life his ultimate goal, Or is death the one he has not yet reached? Are we equal? Is he still blighted with disease? Does he suffer the troubles of men? At first he shone Like a beacon, But now the candle Has spluttered out, Can it be relit Or does it need replacing? While all this occurs The Betrayer Himself sits in the bowels of hell Nick, Lucifer, Satan, Beelzebub. The root of all evil The Devil 666 Looks up from The pit of flames Views life with distorted vision As no others do |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very in depth writing leaving much to the reader to ponder. Well done. |
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Iron Wolf Junior Member
since 2004-01-20
Posts 23 |
Thankyou very much, very kind of you to say so. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
An interesting write....and I agree with Gentle. You leave much to ponder!!!! Hope to read more from you!!! Take Care, Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
intrigued by your thoughts and awed by your words. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
The Dark Father sees things the way they should be seen,,,from the bottom up Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
you definitely have deep thoughts! good write; -) "Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*saving this to come back later* |
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