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A Moment in Time |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
How can I give when I have no place to surrender How can I stumble when I have no place to fall Where can I go when I know not whenst I came My heart standeth still like a ghost laiden to rest My being only a whisper that will one day pass Beseech upon the coming of now and forever is laid the past within a shroud I have only but one self, one truth within my being and one moment to endeavor the passing of now. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hi, and Welcome to Passions. We are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family…. This is a most beautiful first post.... please check your email for a special greeting Kindly Greeneyes~  ~~**~~**~~**~~**~~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions... You belong. The sea isn't as deep as this write... A compliment to the knowing of the self. ThisDiamond Happy Holidays |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Welcome to Passions  I'll be looking for more of your work. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RavenWolfVoyager~ WELCOME to PASSIONS~ Merriest Holiday to you and yours~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, what ThisDiamond said. A wonderful write. Welcome to Passions! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Looking forward to reading more like this one . . . Welcome to this place. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"My being only a whisper that will one day pass" such a deep thought... one that could certainly inspire me: /pip/Forum83/HTML/001622.html Thank you  Welcome Maureen [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (12-26-2003 10:03 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I have only but one self, one truth within my being and one moment to endeavor the passing of now. This is a beautiful first post. I'm going to enjoy reading your work...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Very much enjoyed your first post. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Ravenwolf... Thank you for this incredible write. I also welcome you to Passions and will look forward to reading more of your work. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
You are not a whisper, nor a ghost....I see you, I hear you....loud is thy words...being spoken from heart full of pain.... Let love come and color your world once more..bringing life...to the ghost....let not love be a ghost...let not love die.... There are many hearts to fall and stumble into...ones that can ressurect your mind, body and spirit... another explosive, passionately written poem.. ~ARH  Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Beautifully written! |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
 Well I will go down with this ship |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Ravenwolf Finally, I am able to officially welcome you to Passions now that I have found your first post. I know for a fact that you will be so well received here due to your ability to write from the heart and share your soul. I'll look forward to reading more of your words. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions enjoyed |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
welcome to the passion |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
B R I L L I A N T ! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Welcome to Passions...I do look forward to reading more of your creative pieces. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Welcome to passions! I must say that I'm blown away by this, your first, post. Beautifully written and expressed, vivid emotion and good flow. Nicely done. ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
You write beautifully dear poet!!!! WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!! Hope you enjoy your stay!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
one can learn so much by asking himself questions. a good one! |
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