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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-01-21 10:36 AM

Once upon a dream long ago,
There was a princess and her knight,

She was brokenhearted,
For inside her heart,
There was no light,

She was very hurt,alone and sad,
The king knew of this,
somehow this must change to good from bad,

So one day,
While the princess was away,
To the castle appeared a fine lad,

He was a brave knight,
One which held great honor,
He had come to ask the King
of the hand of his daughter,

The King replied,
Why does thou want her?
For she is bitter and sad,
Sometimes she is angry and gets really mad,

The knight replied with a pleasant smile,
Let me work on her heart,If I may,
Let me take her into my garden of love for just for one day,

If I can break this heart of stone,
I will ask not of flesh or bone,
But the love of the princess's heart,
Shall be thy reward alone,

So agreed said the king,
Tonight meet her near the east wing,
Where music will be played with romance,
Upon this you two shall dance,

If her heart is not melted by ten,
You shall leave,
mever to return here again,

So the knight met the princess
inside the east wing,
It was love at first sight,
Laughter, and romance filled
the air throughout the night,

They danced, they talked, the clock struck ten,
The knight whispered into the princess's ear,
When shall I see you again?

Tomorrow I shall see thee, my knight,
She walked away,
Faded into the light,

On his way down the castle stairs,
The knight met the king,
Who questioned tonights affair,

The king replied, what was it that broke the spell?
The coldness of her heart?
Please do tell, it is tearing me apart,

The knight replied,
Truth, honesty,humor and laughter,
But it was compassion and love,
Thats what really mattered,

She spoke, I listened,
She cried, I comforted,
She laughed , I laughed,

But it was the poetry,
The words from which my heart bled,
warmed her soul, awakened a heart that was dead,

Not knowing was I,
That poetry is her passion,
She read her poem to me,
Which was written in the same fashion,

So it was a meeting of souls,
One of fate and kindred spirits,
It was not I or magic to imply,

But as simple as the love of poetry,
That both had shared,
Where true feelings flowed without a care,

Upon this day and forever,
Their words still leave their mark,
For the Knight became her King,
THE KING OF HER HEART,

The poetry they shared
has touched thousands of wretched souls,
whose broken hearts were severed,

The Princess and her knight,
live inside their kingdom
of love and laughter,
Where Souls meet and bond
and live happily ever after!

In the world of make-believe and fantasy,
Once upon a dream became a reality!

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (01-21-2004 11:12 AM).]

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-01-21 11:26 AM

oh this is *gorgeous*, i just want to *hug* it!
oh you had me dancing through every word...

thank you for a lovely read!

ShakespearesSister
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since 2003-10-14

Posts 24

2 posted 2004-01-21 12:00 PM

What a fairytale! You should write childrens books!

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2004-01-21 12:04 PM

Dawn~Thanks for that gorgeous reply~ your gorgeous yourself liked your photo~

*hugs*

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

4 posted 2004-01-21 12:06 PM

As always ARH you remain true to your compassion and wondrous abilities. A beautiful write indeed. Thank you for sharing.

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2004-01-21 12:06 PM

Sister~ You are my sister

Thanks for stopping in and reading, replying,

You know I am writing a childrens book at the moment! LOL

*hugs*
~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2004-01-21 12:07 PM

I love this!!!!
*into my goodies file*
My Mike melted my stone heart,,,and is truely my king of hearts,,,
great work
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

7 posted 2004-01-21 12:07 PM

ok..now you ARE getting a big giant
***********HUG***************
you lovely woman!!

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

8 posted 2004-01-21 12:10 PM

Raven~ You sneaky little thing, you posted your reply as I was repling! LOL

But in all seriousness, I thank you once again and I feel so valued by your compliments~You are beautiful to me

For me it is an honor to have your replies underneath my poetry!

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

9 posted 2004-01-21 12:12 PM

Michelle~ I am so glad to have touched base with you, relating to something so personal in your own life~

Thank you for being so sweet!

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

10 posted 2004-01-21 12:16 PM

Dawn~ Thanks for that big hug..it knocked me out of my seat ...LOL!

I needed a hug~

Thanks heres one back

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-01-21 12:52 PM

blossom on! blossom on!

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

12 posted 2004-01-21 12:57 PM

Thanks Dixie from now on call be Blossom~LOL

Don't hurt yourself jumping so much up there, your going to case a darn earthquake LOL!

~ARH

here I'll jump with you

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

13 posted 2004-01-21 01:00 PM

this was truly one very pleasurable read...thank you for taking the time and effort to put it all together so well.

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

14 posted 2004-01-21 01:08 PM

Steve why thank you sir, how nice to hear your sweet words!
I just opened my heart and it flowed out like a river~Your reply was a pleasure to receive!

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

15 posted 2004-01-21 02:24 PM

Oh how I so love this.....VERY NICE!!!!
Write on......
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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