Open Poetry #30 |
Magic Moment |
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Magic moment View over mountains This casts a magic moment How I felt so little In the hush of golden sunset Skylines encourage the soul Spiritual in natural scent How I bid the night Not to take over sunset’s delight Colours of gold and purple blue Brushed upon evening’s canvas Mirror sun’s and moon’s tangled light Exceed glorious hush inside twilight View over mountains Breathtaking moment of bliss How it made me feel so blessed Cast by nature’s kiss ~*Theresia~* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you took me there |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
There is nothing more spectacular than Nature painting the sky at sunset! Glorious, and you captured it for us to enjoy...thank you for the mental images, my friend! ~S~ Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this was colourful...vibrant.... *a little holiday for my mind* very pleasant read! |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Oh, can I just stay inside this writing?? and NOT have to work today... it sounds like such a beautiful place! LOL Great imagery and a vivid picture of something nice comes to mind Brian Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Darling lady ... the greatest magic is in seeing you here with such a lovely presentation of thought~ BEAUTIFUL ... just BEAUTIFUL~ Sending special *Huglets* your way~ Don't stay gone so long~ ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A "Magic moment" indeed !! Lovely. Chris |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
stunning masterpiece of beauty Charisma! always a joy when you bless us with your words gal. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When I come to your neck of the world, I plan to have you show me this and see if what you see matches up to the beauty of your write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Skylines encourage the soul Spiritual in natural scent How I bid the night Not to take over sunset’s delight as the entire poem speaks loudly, and stunningly. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
An exquisite poem M'Lady! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwwww, I've missed you sooooooo much, sweet friend, you are one of my favorites here on Passions and it always makes my heart dance seeing your smile on these pages, I hope to see you more often here, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
passing shadows: Glad you were there too Sunnyone: thank you dear friend, Nature has so many magic to present us, all we have to do is to enjoy them. muted: thank you muted ThUnDeRkYsS: Well dear, I wont stop you to stay here...take your time. Work can always been done *s* Marge: Always good to see you dear lady and I love those special huglets from you..it always warms my heart Nightshade:thank you *s* Gentle Spirit: thank you for the read, glad you enjoy my words here Karilea: I would be honoured to view with you the beauty of nature.....and I bet we will enrich and enjoy even the very small detaille in our view. LeeJ:thank you for reading and your sweet reply *s* Munda: thank you dear lady *s* Noah: awwwwww you always warm my heart with your enthousiasm and kind words. Thank you dear friend for reading and your always loving and kind words. God bless you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Colours of gold and purple blue Brushed upon evening’s canvas Mirror sun’s and moon’s tangled light Exceed glorious hush inside twilight ================== lovely lovely... so good to read you and have you back in the blue pages poetess Charisma. How foolish must man be, not to be impressed by mountains and trees |
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Iron Wolf Junior Member
since 2004-01-20
Posts 23 |
Colours of gold and purple blue Brushed upon evening’s canvas Mirror sun’s and moon’s tangled light Exceed glorious hush inside twilight The best bit, not that it wasn't all amazing. |
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