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choshi
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0 posted 2004-01-21 01:24 PM



River sunrise,
shadows stretch along the banks
earlier each day-
how soon the night has vanished
we barely uttered a word!

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1 posted 2004-01-21 01:34 PM


River sunset
gentle breezes pulling in
whats left of shadows playing
leaving echoed ripples
of words "we barely uttered"
still traveling outward
searching for eve companion..

had to do this....
hope you dont mind!

"...and longed to kiss her hand an lie a thousand summers at her feet." ~excerpt A.L. Tennyson

choshi
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2 posted 2004-01-21 01:41 PM


River sunset
gentle breezes pulling in
whats left of shadows playing
leaving echoed ripples
of words "we barely uttered"
still traveling outward
searching for eve companion..


had to do this....
hope you dont mind!

Mind??? on the contrary, dear, ~M...For me your poem in response is the highest compliment....it is truly where hearts reach ~C

Justbleu
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3 posted 2004-01-21 02:34 PM


Lovely....reminds me of hiking.
How quickly those moments end.
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


choshi
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4 posted 2004-01-21 04:08 PM


Lovely....reminds me of hiking.
How quickly those moments end.
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette
.....Thank you, glad you enjoyed Bridgette...~C

DavePage
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5 posted 2004-01-21 07:57 PM


Enthralled

Dave

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