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jord4n Junior Member
since 2003-12-12
Posts 15 |
Everything cancerous faces and boredom blown erections sitting in a room staring at a blank wall filled with white blinks of crystal flashes snow filled with yellow dots is never tomorrows heaven wake from tomorrow filled with a new sorrow music made is an emotion emotion felt is human emptiness human emptiness is human selfishness human selfishness is human happiness water dripping from a rusty faucet cuts dry with a sting russian winters are year long my life is year long every day is last night every night is a loosing fight red room filled with green flourescent flowers smell my face camera lens catch my speed i am a blur my life is a blur let me try and show you what my life is with a broken bottle and a dirty wrist my hand is sore my wrist is numb oh God what have I done to her staring at a blank ceiling with a blank emotion a blank emotion is not blank that in itself is an emotion all motion is emotion my potion is numbing emotion elation from my elevation basement bleakness speaks highly hard floors and dirty ceilings an old bar and a broken window spider webs catch stagnant air walk out basements are the best to run out of --------- say whatever you please. thx - Jordan |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You have described despair on this page...sobbing and caught in the throat. It takes great depths to pour this batter out...hold on. Excellent write. TD |
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jord4n Junior Member
since 2003-12-12
Posts 15 |
thanks - Jordan |
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