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jord4n
Junior Member
since 2003-12-12
Posts 15


0 posted 2004-01-21 04:02 AM


Everything

cancerous faces and boredom blown erections
sitting in a room staring at a blank wall
filled with white blinks of crystal flashes
snow filled with yellow dots
is never tomorrows heaven

wake from tomorrow
filled with a new sorrow
music made is an emotion
emotion felt is human emptiness
human emptiness is human selfishness
human selfishness is human happiness

water dripping from a rusty faucet
cuts dry with a sting
russian winters are year long
my life is year long
every day is last night
every night is a loosing fight

red room filled with green flourescent flowers
smell my face
camera lens catch my speed
i am a blur
my life is a blur

let me try and show you what my life is
with a broken bottle and a dirty wrist
my hand is sore
my wrist is numb
oh God what have I done to her

staring at a blank ceiling with a blank emotion
a blank emotion is not blank
that in itself is an emotion
all motion is emotion
my potion is numbing emotion
elation from my elevation

basement bleakness speaks highly
hard floors and dirty ceilings
an old bar and a broken window
spider webs catch stagnant air

walk out basements are the best to run out of

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say whatever you please.
thx

- Jordan

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2004-01-21 06:56 AM


You have described despair on this page...sobbing and caught in the throat.
It takes great depths to pour this batter out...hold on.
Excellent write. TD

jord4n
Junior Member
since 2003-12-12
Posts 15

2 posted 2004-01-21 10:52 AM


thanks

- Jordan

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