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The Pale
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The Pale |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I call you No matter where I am Where I look I see your eyes A wild day beckons I can translate your vision Your life on my breath As Custom dictates I am the darkness I seek my maiden fair In tattered and torn velvet dress To be engulfed in hair To feel her body warm For me she wear’s no veil Just eyes that stare ahead And a face below the pale |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...great write! Eric |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh this sounds sexy... very nice (going to read it again!) Someday I'll fly, Someday I'll soar, |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks We all dream but the phone bill from Manila ringing Jean every night was immense dave |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Yay! I love this, dearest friend, your imagery is always so colorful, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dave, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
very good Dave watch out for those phone bills though. bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Yes I know We dont have civilisation on phone bills in the UK Dave |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Lovely write Dave. I do enjoy your poetry. When my sister was alive.....Oh! Those phone bills. See Ya Bon-Bon  |
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