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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-01-20 11:41 AM

Tongue-In-Cheek

I taste the churn and wonder
where IT will lead today.
The queasiness unspoken,
the "un" I never say.

Sighing to be exorcised,
those demons from within.
Battling this spirit's rise
to feel the need again.

A double sigh, it seems to be
escaping lips that free
the want of want, this build of thought,
this need of any he.

Yes any he, to eye me once
or maybe once again.
Such loneliness, endured too long,
I sacrifice to when.

Routine me, words I wish ignored.
Storms to brew instead.
Missing what I seem to lack,
dance thoughts within this head.

Always cheating, stranded me,
along life's weary path.
I cast away, marooned to be
in eye of worded bath.

Yes, bathed I am, in "always" thoughts
that leave behind a taste,
wondering if "a touch of me"
will ever become laced...

Laced and intertwined with he,
that one that's eyed me then.
Round and round I surface skim,
to shape the future's when.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-01-20 11:43 AM

Sighing to be exorcised,
those demons from within.
Battling this spirit's rise
to feel the need again.

oh year M, feeling this with you...
within is well known to me as is this feeling...Hugs.

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2004-01-20 11:46 AM

oh, dont i know....

though i dont want "any he", just "the he"...
and well, i dont think "the he" will be found again....oh dear, the longing!

you put into words what sometimes im too afraid to! (im always hiding!!)

Dawn

Someday I'll fly, Someday I'll soar,
Someday I'll be So damn much more
Cause I'm bigger than my body
Gives me credit for.
~John Mayer

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2004-01-20 11:54 AM

thanks Donna and Dawn...actually I was laughing when I wrote this.. having a tiny discussion which brought up some words and I thought..better write down those silly thoughts..this time in rhyme.

I don't want just any he..but the want of wanting sort of plays up the loneliness.

I was discussing about going out to a very nice restaurant which I miss doing for the last couple of years..thinking well, I could always hire an escort, but then thought "darn!"...then I would have to pay for the meal, too... might as well go alone then

so those were my silly thoughts this morning...
hugs
M

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

4 posted 2004-01-20 12:22 PM

In thoughts of naked-not ...
      should thy tongue only taste
        the taste of one's own cheek
      but rather hunger's haste
         the hunger of ones weak

      venture so, to thy loving lip
         and taste no more, ... take a sip!
         *S    *S    *S     OXOX

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-01-20 12:38 PM

I always know how you feel...and can relate

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-01-20 12:38 PM

"Yes, bathed I am, in "always" thoughts
that leave behind a taste,
wondering if "a touch of me"
will ever become laced...

Laced and intertwined with he,
that one that's eyed me then.
Round and round I surface skim,
to shape the future's when."

Well said Maureen...
I know these thoughts...
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2004-01-20 12:42 PM

Yep...I know the "yearning"

Just be prepared..because just when you give up completely..it comes knocking...

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

8 posted 2004-01-20 12:46 PM

Very well done my friend, I think there are lots of us who can relate to this... the seemingless never-ending wait can get to be a long one.

{{HUGZ}}

Brian

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2004-01-20 04:50 PM

(big angel hugs) I absolutely agree to what's been said...you have more than you think you do and the moment you surrender may also be the moment you find all you need! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are special to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Endlessecho
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

10 posted 2004-01-20 05:11 PM

How beautifully elegant. Those words just all danced together.

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

11 posted 2004-01-20 05:53 PM

Beautiful penned!

Charisma

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2004-01-20 06:00 PM

that one that's eyed me then.
Round and round I surface skim,
to shape the future's when.

Maureen, I feel the same as Susan.....when you
least expect it, the "he" will come along.

Ethel

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

13 posted 2004-01-21 09:21 AM

A truly great write!! I was reading over your explanation and was in awe how you turned that dilema into this great piece of work!! Again you have outdone yourself!!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

14 posted 2004-01-21 09:34 AM

ctowen, ~smiling ~ at you wonderful response..something I always do when reading your responses.

hugs Craig and thanks,
M( hope you aren't as cold there as it is here..brrrrr)

Dixie, yes..a continuous feel of wanting, wishing, wondering why...

Nancy, sighing..it sometims is very lonely, especially at my age wondering ifever I will be "really happy" sharing my life again with someone who cares.

Hugs back

M

Susan, oh I never gave up..I just stopped expecting. Thank You.

Brian, so nice to see you back ere...already has been too long, but I am a survivor (of sorts).

Noah, hmmm..."all I need" (sounds like a song) *s I guess I am luckier than most in my situaton.

Endlessecho, Charisma thank you for taking the time to read and respond. I appreciate it.

Ethel, I may be old and "grayer" by then

Ravenwolfvoyager, thanks for your nice comments...you brought a smile to my morning.

M

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