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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2004-01-06 09:06 AM



I tried on my thoughts this morning
while waiting for time to pass.
Dressed and undressed them several times
wondering if the situation would last.
Would it be worth it to fashion for eyes to see
the more of the want of what would be?
I tried on my thoughts this morning
just to size them for you and me.


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2004 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-01-06 09:15 AM


Maureen,
A delight to read, I enjoyed the lighter side.  

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2 posted 2004-01-06 09:39 AM


And what beautiful thoughts, with whatever your wearing....
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

LngJhnAg
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3 posted 2004-01-06 09:53 AM


I noticed your slip is showing,
And a hook or two is undone.
Could it be your libido is growing?
Are you ready to have some fun?

If the answer is "Yes" -

Stay away from those two rascally scalawags,
Known to all as Balladeer and Toe.
Don't let them get their hands on your clasps,
Don't trust them with those hooks, Mo!!!

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2004-01-06 10:14 AM


ahhaa if it's advice you give
I think you ought to know
I've seen those hands of Balladeer
though not seen those of Toe

Large they are but worry not
there's plenty of me not known
that I am of a careful mind
protecting what is shown

~smiling~

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5 posted 2004-01-06 06:06 PM


MzWynter~
I love it !
Love it !
Love it !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2004-01-06 06:16 PM


*laughing here*  thought Longjohn would have made a comeback...but sadly he didn't and I was all ready to "spar" today...

Thanks Marge
hugs
M

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7 posted 2004-01-20 11:33 AM


this is a great concept, i never likened my thoughts/feelings in this way....you have given me a new perspective!

wow, always learning something new

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2004-01-20 11:47 AM


Hey You, I see you are reading me... I have been writing  bits and pieces...some thoughtful, some lighthearted just to keep the energy going.

Dawn, email me anytime at plzdntgo@aol.com
and I can fill you in on what isn't going on in my life
by the way, I thought I WAS the pout princess..well at least all my life I have been told that.

M

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9 posted 2004-01-20 04:46 PM




(smiles) Yay! This is precious, sweet friend, and with the leftovers of these memories and thoughts, make yourself a homemade quilt to keep you warm always, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2004-01-21 09:21 AM


Thank you, Noah. I love to read your sweet responses..always so positive.


M

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