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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-01-21 09:18 AM

Leftover Warmth

The colors season my heart
with leftover warmth.
Just another step towards tomorrow.
That voice inside shadowing my nerves,
reaching for that hidden treasure
that confesses alone,
to the missing of you.

Smiling from across the room,
the intake of a dream
fades to the music,
as you take my hand
and lead me, there,
to that place where believing
resides.

You, all in black,
but the blue of your eyes
rewarding me in the only color
that sees through the darkness,
to journey me into the new.

M

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2004-01-21 09:27 AM

Sounds of a lady I once knew
streaking through this, methinks.

A good write, Maureen...
well done.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-01-21 09:44 AM

when we love, we don't see color...but uch more, brightness, not faults...just the beauty that person possesses, even if it doesn't coincide with our characters....we're able to allow them, their paths, joys and time.

Wonderful treasure your words...marvelously brilliant...thank you for sharing.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2004-01-21 09:50 AM

"as you take my hand
and lead me, there,
to that place where believing
resides"

I like this!!!

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-01-21 09:52 AM

Maureen,
Your write a delight.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2004-01-21 10:00 AM

You, all in black,
but the blue of your eyes
rewarding me in the only color
that sees through the darkness,

Wonderful Maureen. hugs, Chris

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2004-01-21 10:16 AM

nice

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-01-21 12:38 PM

all in black with blue eyes...sounds like someone I know...well

great piece M

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

8 posted 2004-01-21 12:48 PM

The colors season my heart
with leftover warmth.
Just another step towards tomorrow.

Wow!!! and another beauty...

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2004-01-21 01:33 PM

Smiling from across the room,
the intake of a dream
fades to the music,
as you take my hand
and lead me, there,
to that place where believing
resides.

This is just too beautiful!
Took my breath away it did.
You write such beautiful romance Maureen,
you're all heart girl friend~ hugs~

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