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Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2004-01-20 02:41 AM

I'll be there
When it seems there's no standing by
I'll be there
When you can't hold back the tears inside
I'll be there
When you're lonely, no one understands
I'll be there
Someone to hold your hand...

I'll be there
Just to give you back your love to me
I'll be there
Just to hold you, rock you tenderly
I'll be there
Just to help you find your dreams and plans
I'll be there
Someone to hold your hand...

I'll be there
Through the sunshine and the pouring rain
I'll be there
Through the laughter and the sometimes pain
I'll be there
Right beside you when you make your stand
I'm the one
Someone to hold your hand...

Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-01-20 02:50 AM

very comforting and warm

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2004-01-20 02:56 AM

this is so tender and loving, *sigh*, very lovely.....

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-01-20 03:25 AM

This is would be a good one for my children and my mom! Thanks for penning it.

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2004-01-20 03:49 AM

awwwwww how warm and tenderly written, enjoyed the comforting read very much

Charisma

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

5 posted 2004-01-20 04:12 AM

Hi passing shadows, muted, iliana, and Charisma! And thank you so much for your lovely responses to my humble effort here...*smiles*

January is a hard month for a lot of folks, with the Holidays gone, nasty weather (depending on where you live), and the lonliness sometimes sets in to accompany the dark, dreary days. So, this one is just to give hugs where they are needed, and maybe a little hope....

~Sunny~

Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2004-01-20 07:35 AM

This is the kind of work you need to have on hand,,when you need a hug,,,,,,,very comforting,,,,much , much enjoyed
Michelle

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

7 posted 2004-01-20 07:38 AM

Sunnyone

And I will be there to hold your hand when you need someone. Beautiful words - very comforting.

Ariana

J.Samm
Member

since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

8 posted 2004-01-20 09:09 AM

whoever you dedicated this poem to is surely lucky and blessed!

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

9 posted 2004-01-20 09:28 AM

What comforting words, I feel good just reading them

This is great!

Brian

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2004-01-20 09:45 AM

OhSunnyOne~
This touches ... this is my day to go to a local retirement home and hold hands with some lovely, lovely folks~
To share poetry with them ... to wallow in their memories ... I am taking your piece to share~
They will be as touched as I am~

Thank YOU~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

11 posted 2004-01-20 10:09 AM

beautifully said, sometimes we need to know someone will be there....

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

12 posted 2004-01-20 10:16 AM

a very much needed hug Sunny...
this is beautiful, indeed..
to know there is a hand to hold,
a comforting thought...

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

13 posted 2004-01-20 11:42 AM

This was very sweet!

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

14 posted 2004-01-20 12:58 PM

So nice to read your work this morning, and this was truly a lovely piece.

Life is but a magical mystery
~ Blessed Be ~

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

15 posted 2004-01-20 01:45 PM

wonderfully done!

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

16 posted 2004-01-20 01:48 PM

Hello, my friend

It's so good to see you, Sunny, and to
be assured that you are there when we
might need you. This is a beautiful poem,
and it really touched my heart. Thank you!!

Ethel

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

17 posted 2004-01-20 01:50 PM

Lovely...simply lovely.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

18 posted 2004-01-20 03:14 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is so beautiful and made me cry as I want to hold my girls hand softly and let her know she can trust me and I will always be faithful to her! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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