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Someone to Hold Your Hand
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Someone to Hold Your Hand |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 I'll be there When it seems there's no standing by I'll be there When you can't hold back the tears inside I'll be there When you're lonely, no one understands I'll be there Someone to hold your hand... I'll be there Just to give you back your love to me I'll be there Just to hold you, rock you tenderly I'll be there Just to help you find your dreams and plans I'll be there Someone to hold your hand... I'll be there Through the sunshine and the pouring rain I'll be there Through the laughter and the sometimes pain I'll be there Right beside you when you make your stand I'm the one Someone to hold your hand... Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very comforting and warm |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this is so tender and loving, *sigh*, very lovely.....  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This is would be a good one for my children and my mom! Thanks for penning it. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awwwwww how warm and tenderly written, enjoyed the comforting read very much  Charisma |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi passing shadows, muted, iliana, and Charisma! And thank you so much for your lovely responses to my humble effort here...*smiles* January is a hard month for a lot of folks, with the Holidays gone, nasty weather (depending on where you live), and the lonliness sometimes sets in to accompany the dark, dreary days. So, this one is just to give hugs where they are needed, and maybe a little hope.... ~Sunny~ Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
This is the kind of work you need to have on hand,,when you need a hug,,,,,,,very comforting,,,,much , much enjoyed Michelle |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunnyone And I will be there to hold your hand when you need someone. Beautiful words - very comforting. Ariana |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
whoever you dedicated this poem to is surely lucky and blessed! |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
What comforting words, I feel good just reading them  This is great!Brian Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhSunnyOne~ This touches ... this is my day to go to a local retirement home and hold hands with some lovely, lovely folks~ To share poetry with them ... to wallow in their memories ... I am taking your piece to share~  They will be as touched as I am~ Thank YOU~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
beautifully said, sometimes we need to know someone will be there.... ~*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
a very much needed hug Sunny... this is beautiful, indeed.. to know there is a hand to hold, a comforting thought...  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This was very sweet! "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
So nice to read your work this morning, and this was truly a lovely piece. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
wonderfully done! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello, my friend  It's so good to see you, Sunny, and to be assured that you are there when we might need you. This is a beautiful poem, and it really touched my heart. Thank you!! Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely...simply lovely. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is so beautiful and made me cry as I want to hold my girls hand softly and let her know she can trust me and I will always be faithful to her! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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