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A Moments Thought |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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Feeling what I'm thinking close my eyes take a breath chemical release triggers thoughts S P I R A L I N G down my cortex abrasively removing impurities left there by... the world Re l e a s e me from my orchestrating complexity I liked things better simple. Simple as the smile on an infants face simple like blue just blue clear like the sparkling spring before you hit the W a l l when you evolve from pure infancy... fascinated seeking the new happy unaware pampered to the existance fueled by the world frustrated lost battered hurt you need to close your eyes... and rest. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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misao Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 50 |
Truely incredible.  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very cool  It's great to get to read you again. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Another great piece of art~ ~ARh  Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
misao - Thank you for your kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed it. SEA - Thank you, glad to be back and looking forwards to reading more of you and everybody else again  ARh - Glad you enjoyed, good to see you again too  |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
first, nice to meet you.... this is a great way for me to be introduced to your poetry...this is great, reminds me of the way my mind works at times... much enjoyed |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I liked things better simple. Simple as the smile on an infants face simple like blue just blue clear like the sparkling spring ~*~ Me? I liked all of it. Thank you, Sir. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is amazing....wow! ~*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
It is SO nice to see you here~ This is a wonderful render ... love the structure of thought and the presentation lends itself to the piece quite effectively~ Hey ... GREAT photo ! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
muted - Nice to meet you as well, thank you for the kind words... I dont really have a certain style, just whatever the creativity of the moment brings. Enjoy your stay here at passions  Sunshine - Thank you for the wonderful comment, glad you enjoyed it  Greeneyes - What a great reward your reply is, Thank you and I'm happy I could catch your interest!! Marge - Its so good to be back, Ive missed this place. I'm glad you enjoyed my write and as for the pic, the other one was 5 years old... sort of thought I should update it as long as I'm back and that's all I had of just me, thank you for liking it Good to see and hear from you again girl Brian Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
Feeling what I'm thinking close my eyes take a breath chemical release triggers thoughts This is incredible. You think, and that is a great quality. I'm looking for your name now |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
frustrated lost battered hurt you need to close your eyes... and rest. oh yes.....oh my yes... this is wonderful writing... thank you for sharing this lil gem... |
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Iron Wolf Junior Member
since 2004-01-20
Posts 23 |
orchestrating complexity I loved that, a sheer line of genious. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Brian, I don't think I've met you, but I surely am glad to.....this is incredible writing. I loved all of it, but this ending just reached out and grabbed me!!! when you evolve from pure infancy... fascinated seeking the new happy unaware pampered to the existance fueled by the world frustrated lost battered hurt you need to close your eyes... and rest Thanks for sharing this with us, and I hope that you stick around? Ethel |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Incridibble write....you present a moments thought wrapped with art. I enjoyed the read very much thank you for sharing Charisma |
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