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Open Poetry #30

Undone thoughts

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-01-19 01:04 AM

lay back in the days of gloom and despair
feeling of numb is not there drops of salty
tears stain my face.

the brain doesnt like
the situation or this place going through
on and on amously beaten bound broken once
again the looking glass effect never ends

outside looking in on the life i once had
and always wanted but never got. waves upon
yesterday of the sands of the glory of it all

sea shells cut my toes as i venture on to the sea
the soothing waves caring me off to a place of
enlightenment.

The clouds come together and break
out the lighten and the thunder crash down towards
me striking me once again as I wake up on my silver
pillow of dreams.

Fresh from my pc Unedited

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-01-19 03:45 PM

i sometimes share this "daydream" you have... i feel this one...
but we all know that better days are to come...

lovely write

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2004-01-19 05:01 PM

thanks for the comments

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