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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-01-18 10:03 AM

A Moment's Whim

I miss the word play
that once offered
smiles for free

that could tempt the fires,
arouse feelings once forgotten
and me, just wanting
the presence of you.

I miss the touch of thought
that awoke my days,
kept me imprisoned
from all that hurt.

Walls, built around,
a playground,
just for you... and I
always watching you,
for you, to be with you

even if only for a moment's whim.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2004-01-18 10:28 AM

I always treat my inner child to a trip to the toy isle,,,,,,
smiles
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2004-01-18 10:33 AM

Beautiful. Our hearts can do this so perfectly well!
Love, Margherita

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2004-01-18 05:11 PM

(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, all your poetry is a joy to read and this brought our the smile in the little boy in my heart! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-01-18 07:46 PM

Maureen -- A+++ ...... hope it returns to you!

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

5 posted 2004-01-19 12:19 PM

M,
Such a loyal woman you are! And an awesome writer too. Hope all is well. Miss you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-01-19 04:08 AM

don't I know it

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

7 posted 2004-01-19 06:05 PM

whim...it's a beautiful word.
knowing that you always are waiting for your "one" to bring the smiles back...this seems lonely, but dreamy, a quality i much admire in your poetry.

i hope you playground fills with laughter soon.....until then, i send a *giggle* your way!

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