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Steve Motuel
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since 2003-12-19

Posts 72
Bergen auf Ruegen, Germany

0 posted 2004-01-18 08:00 AM

Give me a sign

I remember the time
When your love once was mine
And your kisses belonged only to me

The nights were so warm
And filled with your charm
And the joy in my heart, all could see

Give me a reason
Give me a sign
Give me the chance
To say you are mine

Your eyes have a fire
Shining out their desire
But for who I can no longer say

I long to surround you
My love to protect you
My life at your feet I shall lay

Give me a reason
Give me a sign
Give me the chance
To say you are mine

My life had a meaning
Filled up with those feelings
That only you offered to me

And now I’m alone
And I wait by the phone
For the day you say please come to me

Give me a reason
Give me a sign
Give me the chance
To say you are mine

I pray for the day
When once more you will stay
In a world of just me and you

I hope it will come
For I know you’re the one
And my feelings of love are so true

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2004-01-18 08:40 AM

Beautiful song of longing.
Love, Margherita

Steve Motuel
Member

since 2003-12-19

Posts 72
Bergen auf Ruegen, Germany

2 posted 2004-01-18 09:00 AM

And longing indeed....

Thank you for reading and commenting...

love
Steve

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-01-18 09:35 AM

Sounds like a slow song, Steve...
I enjoyed it, thank you.

richard taylor
Member

since 2004-01-13

Posts 136

4 posted 2004-01-18 09:45 AM

Hi Steve,
This will make a good song, why not try it with music, well done.
regards Richard.

Steve Motuel
Member

since 2003-12-19

Posts 72
Bergen auf Ruegen, Germany

5 posted 2004-01-18 01:17 PM

Thanks guys.

I sent this to my friend who put a number of my songs / poems to music.. on my HP are 5 pieces, 1 on my poem page and at the top is a like to a page for Franxx there there are 4 further songs, all 5 can be downloaded and are in a better quality than the previews.

Take care

Steve

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

6 posted 2004-01-18 03:50 PM

Wow, Steve!

This was a beautiful piece of writing and I could easily picture it as a song. It is so nice to see a picture of you and to be able to read your words again.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Steve Motuel
Member

since 2003-12-19

Posts 72
Bergen auf Ruegen, Germany

7 posted 2004-01-18 03:54 PM

*** Blushing ***

Thank you Sue, My friend Frank has told me he too likes the new song and has an idea already with what he could do with it! as soon as he sends me the finished song I will post a link to it on here!

Have a great week

Hugs
Steve

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

8 posted 2004-01-18 07:42 PM

I think this needs more exposure

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2004-01-18 07:44 PM

This would make a really good song!

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2004-01-18 09:44 PM

You got the beat, Steve~
Fer sure, fer sure~

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

11 posted 2004-01-19 04:49 PM

I must have mssed this first time around~ great love song, I feel it has an up tempo, a happy tempo to it~

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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