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junemac
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0 posted 2004-01-18 03:41 PM



Time calls
Twisting and turning
Thrusting, rocking
Dragging and churning
Moments passing
Tomorrow in today
Assertively stressing
There is no delay

Future becomes shadow
Fading behind
Emotional passions
Tapering in unwind
Beauty of now
Unique in each breath
fleeing to memory
On the way to its death..

Open your eyes
Embrace times carressings
For tomorrow is today
All moments
Are your blessings

© Copyright 2004 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-01-18 03:43 PM


junemac -- this was a very thoughtful write and I quite enjoyed it!  Thanks for sharing.
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2 posted 2004-01-18 04:25 PM




(smiles) God Bles You, sweet friend, live life to the fullest and chase butterflies every step of the way, yay, this is gorgeous, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet June, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

jaicie114
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3 posted 2004-01-18 10:39 PM


Amazing, junemac...thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

BeaSassy
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since 2005-10-13
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4 posted 2005-12-12 05:20 PM


A poignant reminder that all we have is this moment that we must live in.  We have no guarantee for tomorrow making time one of our must precious commodities.  I love this poem because it gets our attention demanding that we stop, pause and consider what is really important.  Thank you.
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