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Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2003-12-29 11:47 PM

To my Love
4/7/03

You are perfect in every way,
how you move through life each day.
like a saint with wings,
but your judgement stings.
your one flaw:
is the hurt you cause me.
it's the reason we could never be.

With Complete Sincerly,
Juju the poet.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-12-30 12:02 PM

Welcome to Passions In Poetry. I enjoyed reading your
first post. It sounds like it's from your heart.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
Please check your e-mail for a special greeting
from all of us here at PIP.
Hugs,
Ethel/garysgirl
Moderator/Passions In Poetry

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2003-12-30 12:19 PM

Welcome Juju!

Lovely debut...

Susan

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2003-12-30 12:54 PM

So much contrast in so few words -- enjoyed!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-12-30 03:14 AM

oh believe me...I can relate

Welcome to Passions!

Michelle_loves_Mike

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since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2003-12-30 04:29 AM

sad how perfection,,,is so easily marred by reality,,,
welcome to pip talk
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

huddersfield
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 25
huddersfield, England

6 posted 2003-12-30 05:34 AM

As a fellow new member, let me wish you welcome..

Nice poem...i can relate to what is said there...

hope to read some more of your writing soon

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-12-30 07:11 AM

How easily an action
can push someone away...
Well done!
Welcome to Passions, Juju!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

8 posted 2003-12-30 08:03 AM

welcome here....
is the hurt you cause me.
it's the reason we could never be.

so sad.

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

9 posted 2003-12-30 08:26 AM

This poem touches a lot of people Juju. Well written.

Welcome to the poetry boards. As the official Greeter, it is my job to warn you of scalawags and rascals. The two who best fit this description are Balladeer and Toerag (you should read their excellent poetry, but don't fall for their silver-tongued ways). You must never trust them with your most intimate secrets. Only trust me, who will share them only with a few people, and maybe in a couple of poems, and perhaps in a few responses to other poems, and only in one or two newspapers; but, NEVER with everybody else.

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

10 posted 2003-12-30 09:03 AM

Juju,

Welcome to Passions!!!

This is a
wonderful first post, with so much said
in so little words. A lot of people will
benefit from reading this...Enjoy your
stay here and I look forward to reading
more of your work.
Take care,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2003-12-30 09:12 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Much enjoyed your first post!
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

darkatnoon
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since 2003-11-07

Posts 11

12 posted 2003-12-30 10:27 AM

why 4/07/03?

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

13 posted 2003-12-30 11:31 AM

Wow..did I ever feel this. I know of what you speak...it's so unfair all the criticism without them even bothering to get to know you. Sorry you have had to feel this. It's VERY painful when people WON'T communicate with you. I know. Sending a hug.

Terri~

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

14 posted 2003-12-30 01:50 PM

Thank you for replying to my poetry.
Why did I have that date? simple that is when I wrote it.

(c;Juju

darkatnoon
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since 2003-11-07

Posts 11

15 posted 2003-12-30 02:36 PM

was it worth?

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

16 posted 2003-12-30 06:56 PM

worth what??????

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

17 posted 2003-12-30 08:14 PM

JuJu~
Welcome to Passions ...~

Anytime is a good time for a penning~
And any memory is 'worth' it's weight in words~

Happy New Year's wishes to you and yours~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

18 posted 2003-12-30 08:52 PM

I enjoyed your first post. Welcome to Passions.

believe in what your heart feels...

lovejunkie
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 93
Indiana

19 posted 2003-12-31 02:24 AM

at risk of sounding dumb, amen. This was really good and it proves you dont need a lot of words to say something meaningful.

-Steph

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

20 posted 2003-12-31 04:05 PM

Welcome to Passions Juju and thank you for sharing your heart with us.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

EverRuss
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since 2003-12-31

Posts 66
Indiana

21 posted 2003-12-31 04:54 PM

Great poem. Really sums up a lot of emotion in a few words

Russell

Terrina
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since 2003-12-31

Posts 166
California

22 posted 2003-12-31 05:36 PM

Wow, isn't that the problem we all have. Judgement.

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

23 posted 2003-12-31 06:34 PM

Well... falling in love can be good, but I try to use my head. I can't say it wasn't or was, because love kinda happens by accident. Something learned. Sad enuff I still like him. He is a nice guy. He just thinks he is better morally than me. Little than he knows I am alot better with the hole moral thing then him. I find it amusing. It's kinda Ironic. heheheheh.
Thats basicaly why I think he looks at me like that..

Juju

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

24 posted 2003-12-31 06:48 PM

Nice writing...James

shades of paul
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since 2005-12-14

Posts 370
In Reality

25 posted 2005-12-16 08:02 AM

I really liked your first poem.I always find the first ones delightful...paul

shades of paul,peace,love,and happiness

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

26 posted 2006-01-27 12:25 PM

Thank you so much for looking back at this poem. It truely flatters me that some one searched back and would read one of my old poems. Looking back at my poetry I have seen how I have grown. I use to think I didn't really have a style, but now I realize after reading them I do lol. Oh well.

lots of love,
Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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