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kaile
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0 posted 2004-01-18 10:01 AM



nay, no thanks,
i'll rather take this picture myself
i don't wanna my face to spoil the scenery,
you know?
*a sparky grin to the detractor*

I compartment-ize the view
into little square boxes,
fussing about which awe-inspiring
i should take along with me

sometimes, my hands shake
while waiting too long

but i don't relinquish control of the trigger~
perhaps this is my way of
being on top of this oppressive world i'm in,

hoping against hope that
beauty is found within those square boxes

© Copyright 2004 heng kaile - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-18 10:38 AM


kaile, it sure is, but sometimes you have to adjust the focus, the perspective

loved this snapshot


Margherita
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2 posted 2004-01-18 11:09 AM


There is definitely so much beauty to be found.
Lovely write! But consider that the greatest beauty could be found in your eyes ...
Love, Margherita

dinky
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3 posted 2004-01-18 01:12 PM


this was a great write
iliana
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4 posted 2004-01-18 07:52 PM


Kaile -- I'm glad someone is taking pictures who cares!
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5 posted 2004-01-19 09:12 AM


perhaps found both within and without... it is the eye and the way you compose even the common..into new perspectives which can show us the beauty of images..

or of people..

nicely done kaile... nice to read you again


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