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Open Poetry #30

011804-03:15:07

Masked Intruder

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Near golden sunsets

0 posted 2004-01-18 04:15 AM

I wish my muted muse would
return with my smile.

I tire of these feelings
that must come out.

Take me.

-*-*-

Immortality is my illusion.

McLean
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since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

1 posted 2004-01-18 06:09 AM

I get it, I get it! Date, and time. Whew. Your titles had me worried that there was some language I was missing out on! Call me slow...but I'm sure!

This is a sad word combination, I think. I would die if someone took my smile. It is a wonderful release from the oxygen inside.

You're an interesting poet, my friend!

McLean

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-01-18 03:33 PM

i'm tempted to answer, okay, if you insist! But, i'll pass for now. Or, if you meant this some other way, ...... stay!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-01-18 03:37 PM

Philip, don't you think sometimes that our muses are like children? We beg them to speak, stand, walk; then they do, so much so, we ask them to hush, be still, stay quiet.

In the silent surround,
we beg them home again.

Well done, Sir.

richard taylor
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since 2004-01-13

Posts 136

4 posted 2004-01-18 03:41 PM

Hi,
I enjoyed working this out, very clever
good read.
regards Richard.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-01-18 03:56 PM

Well done Philip..
I think sometimes the harder we get our muses to work
the more they tend to dig in their heels.
Relax...the words will then come.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Masked Intruder

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since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

6 posted 2004-01-18 07:22 PM

I'd rather be happy and not writing, than unhappy and writing every night.

-*-*-

Immortality is my illusion.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2004-01-19 09:15 AM

and happiness... is elusive...
a journey, not someplace you arrive.

nice piece..

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