Open Poetry #30 |
Break My Silence |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Break My Silence I search for your face on the streets of city strangers and know your heart as I know my own when I look into midnight sky somewhere you see the same stars as I do and in a million lifetimes and there is only you break my silence come home |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful write, so full of longing. Love, Margherita |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
snap bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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alisa Member
since 2003-08-20
Posts 70Florida |
this one is really amazing.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very lovely, Helen M |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
There are times, when you write just what I feel in my own heart. This is one of them. And, you do it so beautifully. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
That is the highest and lowest I think a soul can feel. The time of stretching. Your heart speaks and it is heard. lol |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Helen.... love those words..."come home" Well done. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful.. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A sad request. I hope it's granted. believe in what your heart feels... |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
If there's no answer from a call such as this, that poor benighted soul is on a different planet altogether. You are the master of short lines -- nobody does it as well as you do. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
beautifully expressed , I sensed the longing Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) Oh Helen, I wish for all that joy to come back home and forever find a nest to tuck itself into, sweet friend, God Bless You, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Three magic words, HeLen: I can relate. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
as always Helen.. you boil it down to a few words and paint the thought and idea with style.. |
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