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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-12-29 04:59 AM



Break My Silence

I search for
your face
on the streets
of city strangers
and know
your heart as
I know my own
when I look
into midnight sky
somewhere
you see
the same stars
as I do
and in
a million lifetimes
and there is
only you
break my silence
come home


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2003-12-29 05:44 AM


Wonderful write, so full of longing.
Love, Margherita

bslicker
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2 posted 2003-12-29 07:40 AM


snap

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

alisa
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3 posted 2003-12-29 08:50 AM


this one is really amazing....
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2003-12-29 09:05 AM


very lovely, Helen

M

SmartChick
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5 posted 2003-12-29 09:13 AM


There are times, when you write just what I feel in my own heart. This is one of them. And, you do it so beautifully.
iliana
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6 posted 2003-12-29 12:16 PM


That is the highest and lowest I think a soul can feel.  The time of stretching.  Your heart speaks and it is heard.  lol
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2003-12-29 12:18 PM


Beautiful Helen....
love those words..."come home"
Well done.
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

Zinsser
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Calif.
8 posted 2003-12-29 08:48 PM


beautiful..
scorpio
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right...there
9 posted 2003-12-29 09:06 PM


A sad request.  I hope it's granted.

believe in what your heart feels...

James_A_Fraser
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Out Making Anticlines
10 posted 2004-01-18 11:10 AM


If there's no answer from a call such as this, that poor benighted soul is on a different planet altogether.

You are the master of short lines -- nobody does it as well as you do.



~~J

HopeS
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11 posted 2004-01-18 12:34 PM


beautifully expressed , I sensed the longing

Hope

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12 posted 2004-01-18 12:37 PM



Mistletoe Angel
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13 posted 2004-01-18 04:34 PM




(big angel hugs) Oh Helen, I wish for all that joy to come back home and forever find a nest to tuck itself into, sweet friend, God Bless You, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

MARK V SHELDON
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14 posted 2004-01-18 05:56 PM


Three magic words, HeLen:  I can relate.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Cpat Hair
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15 posted 2004-01-19 09:10 AM


as always Helen.. you boil it down to a few words and paint the thought and idea with style..


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