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Open Poetry #30

Wave My Hand

Laoha
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 161
Nevada, USA

0 posted 2004-01-17 12:52 PM

Wave My Hand
--- on new year eve 2004

When the year is
becoming the last year
don't you think I should
wave my hand

to say goodbye to
the old pain and sorrow
the same way as fallen leaves swirled
away on the chilly wind

and bow my head
but raise my heart
ready to leave my foot steps all over
the surface of this earth

2003-12-31 at 11pm

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Energy of the sun
Nutritions of the earth
And hardwork of the farmers
Through the summer
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Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

1 posted 2004-01-17 06:12 AM

Laoha,

This was a beautiful entrance into the new year. Enjoyed... I wish you the best.
~Sadelite~

Laoha
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 161
Nevada, USA

2 posted 2004-01-17 02:08 PM

The wish will come true if you try hard enough.

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

3 posted 2004-01-18 03:15 PM

Is it too late to do this now?
...the year hasn't started so well.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-01-18 03:42 PM

When shall I expect you in Kansas?
I liked this very much, Laoha.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2004-01-19 09:16 AM

nicely penned.. and with good thoughts..

I enjoyed

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