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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2004-01-17 08:01 AM

Of tales

I chased my tail into a well
And disappeared into a shell
And there I spent a part of prime
Counting daydreams wasting time

We all have dipped ourselves this core
Some in laughter and some in awe
But I would wave my tale in sass
And watch it pass within morass

It is a game that I would do
A comment passed a smile of rue
A point of information’s leaf
Then wag my tale in unbelief.

It is an essence of the prime
With a filter made of rhyme
That pleases me to turn about
And shoot the issue with my doubt

I sink this whale within its frail
By the harpoon of my tale

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

1 posted 2004-01-17 09:02 AM

Your harpoon is on target today, Sy. A direct hit!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-01-17 09:07 AM

Tell Randy to duck when you shoot that harpoon Sy!
And whatch you don't harpoon a whale instead of your tale.
Loved this mornings read.
~Moring hugs & tea, Nancy~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

3 posted 2004-01-17 09:44 AM

Dear Seymour...

What a delightful read on this Saturday morning...thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2004-01-17 10:10 AM

But I would wave my tale in sass
And watch it pass within morass

It is a game that I would do
A comment passed a smile of rue
A point of information’s leaf
Then wag my tale in unbelief.
=============================

YOU ARE SOOOOO COOOOL!!!!!
Shake that money maker sweet Sy babes.. lol

Only you and Randy could come up with verse so dandy. I adore your wit and wile.
The word play and rhyme in this is just too cool for school.
You rock and it rolls me.

But I would wave my tale in sass
And watch it pass within morass

A point of information’s leaf

Tis lines like that -- that prove me point.

*ww*

How foolish must man be, not to be impressed by mountains and trees,
not to be brought to his knees by the beauty of the sky and sea.

Cherokee Lore

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-01-17 10:33 AM

Seymour~
Indeed ... you are the morning tale ... waiting for the telling~

Way to wag it !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><
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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2004-01-17 12:42 PM

Thank you scorpio.

Nancy
Ready for tea and sympathy.

jaicie114
Thank you and love and light back at ya.

JM,
Glad to see you geting in a little computer time. Still have a "B" of a cold but I think I just past the half way mark so the rest should be all down hill.
WWRS

Marge,
Are you wagging the tail of my tale? LOL

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-01-17 12:58 PM

You brighten my morning with your sass, Sey! Good one.

richard taylor
Member

since 2004-01-13

Posts 136

8 posted 2004-01-17 01:03 PM

Hi.
This is a fine piece of writing, full of perfect rhyme and meter I am impresed by the flow of the poem and I would keep this one aside to submit to a magazine.
well done Richard.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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