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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Snow Day coated in candied confection glitters as if gold could it be a tiny inkling of what heaven will behold? January 15, 2004 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very pretty, we got a touch of the glistening also... *s M |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Outstanding! ! ! I absolutely love all the snow writings out there this month, and yours is no exception! |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Inkling is a funny word. Say it, "Inkling". Now say it 3 times..."Inkling, Inkling, Inkling". Funny. I hope it's not cold in heaven. Oooo...how about "snow", but warm snow, like tepid. Comfortable, with all the beauty and fluff. McLean |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So very lovely! I agree with iliana, I am also fascinated by snow. Love, Margherita  ... here it rains btw |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
"coated in candied confection" sweet! |
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richard taylor Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 136 |
Hi Vas, I like this one, you have a good style in short poetry. and longer ones too. Richard. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Hi Virginia, it has been a long time since i read your stuff... this one matches up to your usual standards of course. dig the alliteration you introduced within this very-short piece |
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