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Venom
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Venom |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
Venom You slithered your way into my heart Stung it with your most potent venom You intoxicated my veins with your passion Poisoned my soul with your zeal My mind became so immune to irrationality That even logic could not dissect nor comprehend The premise that you are beneath me And the conclusion that you have conquered me. |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
interesting...the premise that you are beneath me, and the conclusion that you conquered me. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Healthy thought process here...welcome to the forums! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
thank you very much, devina and copperbell! i am very happy and honored to be part of this forum. i am also looking forward to read your poetry. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Welcome to PIP. This was a great first posting. I am impressed with your analogy! Hopefully, this venom was not the kind which has no antidote! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Enjoyed your first post !! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (big angel hugs) This is a sad but excellent debut, sweet friend, I send angel antidote healing hugs your way and may the remedy soon be the only herb swimming in your bloodstream, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet Jasmine, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jasmine, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
J.Samm, a belated Welcome to Passions. This, is a very intense write. What was your inspiration? How did you come to write of the venom of a bad situation so very, very well? Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jasmine~ Fantastic entry !! Welcome to PiP~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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wickedbeautifulpoetry Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 84Indiana, USA |
 Nice job, J.Samm!Looking forward to reading more of your work. Great first post! -Katie- |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is a great piece!!!! I very much enjoyed this!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hi, and Welcome to Passions we are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family…. a little late with the welcoming.....hope you enjoy your time here... please check your email for a special greeting Kindly Greeneyes~  ~*~ |
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