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Sacrificial Barrier |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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To touch a feather- mid-flight falling... and sear a jest of home, come-calling... Me? I find you there- 'tween stucco faces combed so fair... For massive wings- I'd give my all, To be that feather- in free float fall. I'd cast the rancor from my tips, To blaze you once- With iron kiss- And mold you bold thigh to wit... With streak of gray- I'd bow on knee... Neck down to alter, "Purloin of me" Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ohhh..your back! Your shine here has been missed! Great writing, but then I knew it would be when I saw your name! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DevinaGal~ It's sooooooooooo good not to have to come looking for you in Dark~  This is wonderful writing my sweet lady~ You are growing in your art~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
It's so great to see you back! And with this wonderful write.. Well done. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This was very lovely writing. I enjoyed reading it! |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
i love they way you place your words it sounds old ' or found in the attic kindly, redheart angrybraids |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Gentle one- you are too good to me...smiles hunny! Margie-luv...me? (innocent glare) thought I'd make you hunt me down for a bit...but I'm back. love you lady. Enchantress- thank ya kindly dear. missed this. really.  iliana- gracious for your read... redheart...been awhile since I've heard your words 'round here...I've been gone too long...*sighs* take care gal! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is such an awesome write. The words literally drift down the page. Enjoyed! hugs, Chris "When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Hey you! Another beauty this. And? "purloin of me"? Purfect! (Great to see ya!) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! It's so great to see you again, dearest friend, we have missed your heartfelt poetry, yay! (angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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