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original ideas(1) for the Ice poem
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original ideas(1) for the Ice poem |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Tax Collectors - loving the deep meaning too much On a pure crystal you sing Weaving magic on your wing Ice firing from desire beneath Sunbathing friends Drying their wings This is a day to live Magic firing your words Songs no-love no-one heard Still with sorrow as you perch Heat melting every dream Heart bursting every seam Melting your stars to die River floods your desire Rocks calm your flight to fire Torrents race to your ire Politics an cowardly escape Peace with frenzy Warm your heart Cold love your magic Birth to start Perhaps |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Intriguing was the word that came to mind when I read this. BEEEEEwell! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I should have taken out the line on politics. It was a slip and it does screw up the whole poem. Dave |
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