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Hymn For The Faithfully Detached
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Hymn For The Faithfully Detached |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Hymn For The Faithfully Detached By: Noah Eaton 1/16/04 When you saw the grave buried for your mother, did you feel for one moment exactly like your sister or brother? I now believe these things can fill you with wonder It's no myth why the tears are taken onto another... Times like these I am left only to ponder How could we have not taken time to understand the thunder You and I were so young, we still had time to discover But it was the sunshine that made us wonder... But don't fear, Don't fear, faithfully detached... It's those moments that can make you take cover You recognize you have wings but you fear soaring over You believe the skies were missing a color, missing in your soft candy heart But don't fear, Don't fear, faithfully detached... It's those moments that can force you to discover, your lachrymose cheeks stained with the blood of others I believed the skies were missing a color, and that's when it made me begin to wonder... But don't fear, Don't fear, faithfully detached... Don't fear, Don't fear, faithfully detached... "You'll find something that's enough to keep you But if the bright lights don't receive you You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20 |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I needed to read this today buddie...how are ya? Nice to see you posting, and this is lovely. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey! Good to see you sidekick! Enjoyed this very much... Nice to read you again. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
haven't seen much from you but this is good |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"It's those moments that can make you take cover You recognize you have wings but you fear soaring over You believe the skies were missing a color, missing in your soft candy heart But don't fear, Don't fear, faithfully detached... It's those moments that can force you to discover, your lachrymose cheeks stained with the blood of others I believed the skies were missing a color, and that's when it made me begin to wonder..." Noah, this is my favorite of yours so far! I really liked it! |
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