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Alone In The Dark
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Alone In The Dark |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan 
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All alone in the dark she sits with a cigarette burning thinking of someone she misses. His words made her smile,laugh and cry. All alone in the dark with a cigarette burning, remembering things they did together. The quiet moments, whispers shared. All alone in the dark she sits with a cigarette burning, her heart aching endlessly |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
This is really good. Thank you for sharing. P.S. Candles are almost as pretty lit as a cigarette;-) |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
This is very touching...and very well done. Thank you for sharing it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
have you been watching me? *sigh* |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Nice emotions I suppose we should write PC poems these days I never got the hang of being correct I just treated people with respect I like this, it is the kind of words that gently move beneath your skin Dave |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
froggy -- I know the feeling; I've been there as well. Thanks for your poem. But, you are not alone here now.  |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Sorry it took so long to say thank-you all for the wonderful nice comments. :-) |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Sounds like a long and repeated night Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Thank-you Michelle_loves_Mike. :-) |
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