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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-12-28 05:55 PM

On the whims of wind
you were delivered,

the echoing chimes
sang of autumn,

we lay bare beneath
the blanket of sky,

so soft your kiss,
your goodbye,
without the predictability
of a followup time,

i seek you now
in blades of grass,
in beads of rain,
beyond the pink leafed trees,
above the point where horizons dim,
uncaptured by a photo lens,

as branches change
the dawns
from gold to taupe to reds,
then to vacant spaces,
time and time again,

the wind blows freely
through these netted hands,

as i seek to find its beginning or its end,

but silly me,

landing back in spring's embrace
missing autumns rebirth
that came and went
round the bend
two times again,

while i was
standing here with
just a prayer
against the interception
of the wind

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-29-2003 08:05 AM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2003-12-28 06:02 PM

Oh, this is wonderful, dear inkedgoddess!
Filled with colored emotion.
Love and hugs. Margherita

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

2 posted 2003-12-28 06:51 PM

Stunning, the captivations are so vivid and beutifully orchestrated. Well done, this work is loved.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-12-28 08:06 PM

I could have copied the whole dang poem,
but this stands out.....

so soft your kiss,
your goodbye,
without the predictability
of a followup time,

i seek you now
in blades of grass,
in beads of rain,
beyond the pink leafed trees,
above the point where horizons dim,
uncaptured by a photo lens

This is just too beautiful and
one of your very best by far!

Love ya little girlie girl~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2003-12-28 08:08 PM

"while i was
standing here with
just a prayer
against the interception
of the wind"

Wistful and beautiful write........BEEEEwell!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2003-12-28 11:19 PM

Lovely Inked... especially.....

i seek you now
in blades of grass,
in beads of rain,
beyond the pink leafed trees,
above the point where horizons dim,
uncaptured by a photo lens,

Maree

"I can't believe
I've lost the very best of me"

Natalie Merchant

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

6 posted 2003-12-29 07:47 AM

Very vivid and with alot of passion,,,,excellent!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2003-12-29 08:05 AM

thanks guys and dolls

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

8 posted 2004-01-18 09:35 PM

needed to be brought back. Its too good not to be seen again

PassionandFun
Member

since 2003-07-30

Posts 60

9 posted 2004-01-28 03:31 PM

oh so very romantic and with such underlying passion...

Very nice!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2004-01-31 07:47 AM

thanks u 2

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-01-31 01:34 PM

*wondering how I missed this*

glad I went back here to run through my favorite poets

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

12 posted 2004-01-31 09:56 PM

thanks dixie doll
u are the queen of the bumps

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