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Singularity
Junior Member

since 2004-01-16

Posts 10
Sunny California

0 posted 2004-01-16 11:26 AM

The first time I saw you,
I thought I'd wandered into a dream;
An angel sent from Heaven
Is what you seemed to be.

I've spent days and nights
In my bedroom,
Trying to write
The perfect poem to give to you

But this is all I could come up with,
So it will have to do;
I wish being perfect came to me
As easily as it does to you.

My mind wanders to the day
When we will be together.
Being with you, I always feel the same way:
No cares at all and light as a feather.

Now we're walking down the beach,
Just enjoying our time together.
I forget about my speech
And end up talking about the weather.

Now we sit down on the sand
And gaze up toward the stars.
You reach over to hold my hand,
I smile and wrap you in my arms.

It means so much to me just to have you near;
To see your radiant smile, or hear your angelic voice...
I think to myself, "I hope this night will never end,
With this angel that Heaven's sent."

I tell you how much I care for you,
Your kiss tells me what is left unspoken.
Now I know this is a dream...
And I hope that it will never end.

Terrina
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 166
California

1 posted 2004-01-16 11:28 AM

Sweet;-)

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2004-01-16 03:54 PM

Such a heartfelt write.
Receptive ears will hear between the shallow sighs of this self search. Dreams are the illustrations of the book your soul is writing you. Wishing you every gentle dream.
ThisDiamond

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-01-16 03:56 PM

There was a sweet sincerely in your words -- lucky girl!

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2004-01-16 04:02 PM

WOW! I didn't see this before and I just posted my poem titled "Angel Wings" with almost the same words....incredible!

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

5 posted 2004-01-17 11:48 AM

sweet...lucky woman

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