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My Dream
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My Dream |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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I dream of when I waken to a morning filled with love When all the questions deep within come answered from above I dream of peace throughout the world, a land of mans reprieve I dream of days that carry hope and people who believe I dream of being more than one who travels just one road I dream of friends, so many friends, who lighten up my load I dream we all are happy and without the need to cry I dream that I'm so lucky and my soul will never die I dream, I dream and then I wake to try and live the dream My dream then does become my life and life becomes my dream |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
What a beautiful dream to be living. This was a musical piece to me, and I really enjoyed the flow. Fantastic dreams, especially in light of what day is coming, when a profound dream was stated to all. McLean |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
McLean, your words meant so much to me, thank you, very much appreciated. Sincerely Rick |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
A Song came to my mind as well~"These Dreams" by the band Heart.... Thanks for allowing us to see your dreams...sometimes we do need a reality check and get our head out of the clouds... I know I am a dreamer. I share the same dreams as you...I am a Pisces and they dream the most of all the signs... ~ARH  Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I think there is truth in 'what we believe we become!' |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
The last lines clinches the poem and must of what you say applies to most...and there is no difficulty of competing with another's property when it comes to a dream...we're all entitled  |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
"my dream then becomes my life, and my life becomes my dream" very well said! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is very nice Rick and I enjoyed reading it as I do all of your writings. Chris "When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Rick Your words always say so much and are always enjoyed by me. You have the ability to touch the hearts of so many people for which I thank you. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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sweet_lost_palestinian1 Member
since 2004-01-08
Posts 90 |
reallyn nice poem keep it up |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Rick, my friend, it honors me well  what a beautiful heart you have! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Millette, great to get your reply, I think that we are all dreamers in one way or another, I seem to dream more than others, yet awaiting their realities to come. iliana, thank you for this reply, wouldn't that be just great to become, here you give much hope. wordwizard, I appreciate your thoughts here, thank you for the visit. J.Samm, thank you for your reply. Chris, thank you for your reply, always very nice to see you here. Dear Sue, I thank you for your reply and kind heart, always great to see you here my friend. sweet_lost_palestinian1, really nice reply, thank you very much. Dear Dixie, thanks for the reply, I do hope you liked it, thanks for the inspiration that you gave. To you all my friends, again thank you very much for your replies, they have all be very much appreciated tonight. Sincerely Rick |
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