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Open Poetry #30

Son, Fall

Masked Intruder

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since 1999-05-23

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Near golden sunsets

0 posted 2004-01-17 07:51 AM

Waiting for my sun to rise
or fall quickly from the sky.

Watching wearily through tear-streaked eyes
uncertain whether I'll live or die.

-*-*-

Immortality is my illusion.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2004-01-17 10:33 AM

so much said with subtle brevity laced with emotional impact.
well done poet sir.

How foolish must man be, not to be impressed by mountains and trees
not to be brought to his knees by the beauty of the sky and sea

Cherokee Lore

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2004-01-17 10:38 AM

Masked~
In the brevity ... you have said so much~
Good to read you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><
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Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2004-01-17 11:02 AM

How can we count the time in this kind of a situation except or the rise and fall of the sun. Minutes seem like days...

Thought provoking sir!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-01-17 11:04 AM

Masked,
Good write, enjoyed.

wordwizard
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since 2003-09-08

Posts 483
on the way to next world

5 posted 2004-01-17 11:26 AM

uncertainty plagues many of us...nice write Masked

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2004-01-17 11:47 AM

c'mere you...

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