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A Cartoon Ecard
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A Cartoon Ecard |
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Laoha Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161Nevada, USA |
A golden leaf fell onto the shoulder of his blue shirt, out of the pondering, he raised his puzzled face up to look for its path in the violet sky of the evening as if to find the meaning of this message. This message traveling at the speed of the light sent by a gentle click. 2004-1-16 |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Nice,,,,, your style is so mellow, really enjoyed Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
understated and elegant... nicely done |
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Laoha Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161Nevada, USA |
So glad to share my thoughts. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Enjoyed this very much -- you took something automated and mechanical and made it come alive! |
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Laoha Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161Nevada, USA |
Just another way of naration. I am learning.  |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Aren't they great sometimes? Interesting subject you've toyed with here. McLean |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Laoha~ I felt the all of this piece in the gentleness of your words~ LOVELY~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Laoha Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161Nevada, USA |
This poem was developed by trying to describe a scene in my mind into a ecard, I wish if only I knew how to make it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh good write |
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Laoha Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161Nevada, USA |
This piece is one of my favorites. |
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