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Clinging To Edges....
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Clinging To Edges.... |
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alan6501 Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 89PA |
CLINGING TO EDGES Clinging to edges I only see pieces Of wholes to be melted true I inhale illusions Paranoia pitfalls And battle-scarred breath Claustrophobic spaces I inhale truth Past the pretty people And their fake disguise Plummeting from the cliff I inhale lies Unfamiliar weight Stabbing blades both ways Devour blood-stained realities I inhale you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ouch |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Well put passing ,,,,,ouch Alan, not your usual stuff my man... still, you get your point accross, loud and clear Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this is powerful, painful... ..dont forget to exhale. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I really liked the way you laid this poem out. Very strong! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
My goodness! Very well done. Enjoyed. Chris "When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know |
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