Open Poetry #30 |
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Fighting my Tomorrows |
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ambrya_nell Junior Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 28Ohio |
Calling into emptiness, echo of my heart. Cold space; left no warmth, no healing for my wounds. Broken wishes for me, drained of color & life. Open hands before me; a vastly barren space. Wandering hopelessly away, deep recesses of consciousness. Beckoning my weak body offering release from reality. My existence a hallow hole; thoughts too difficult to swallow. I still fight a fight I've lost, Still fighting my tomorrows. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh I do know how you feel |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
I have noticed a pattern in the poems written today. We are living to much for tomorrow. You are fighting tomorrow already. Why are we such a rushed generation. Great Poem Ambrya.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and tomorrow remains ever constant and will always be there. I guess its up to us how we end up receiving it! Well written. ![]() |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Those dark shadows something threaten us, don't they? It's not always easy to somehow see the spark of light over there behind those clouds, but it is there, nevertheless, just waiting for you to walk towards it. |
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ambrya_nell Junior Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 28Ohio |
thanx for all you comments I'm working on walking towards it now sunshine... getting there slowly.. ![]() |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
It takes nothing but time and your writing is a wonderful way to express your progress and healing. Great write here, take care and stay strong ![]() HugZ to you Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You keep on walking toward tomorrow, sweetie! Things get better, it just takes time. |
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