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Open Poetry #30

River of memories

misao
Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 50

0 posted 2004-01-15 03:07 PM

If you would die
I swear i'd miss
that once long kiss.
I would shed a million tears
creating a river of memories
If we part
I can fish them from the river
and conceal them in my heart.

You are the one I cant let go of
in your eyes I clearly see
an angel sent from above.
I know you dont want to part with me
you know I dont want to part with you
with this love
I bring to you
a happy life
and your dreams come true.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2004-01-15 03:30 PM

misao, this is avery loving
and tender poem. I like it
very much.

Ethel

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

2 posted 2004-01-15 04:55 PM

so beautiful this is! this is truly
love...the following line got to me

"If we part
I can fish them from the river
and conceal them in my heart."

it's wonderful that memories are always
ours forever, and no one can take them
away! this was just lovely

take care,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2004-01-15 06:00 PM

Been busy while I was away, I see.

(next time change your cookies please)

and yep, we can tell that you were raised by a river too. (If you like river poems, I've got a friend who's got a BUNCH of 'em.)

(and stop looking over my shoulder while I type--sheesh.)

Proud of you, and I do love you.

So there.

"If we part
I can fish them from the river
and conceal them in my heart."

sighs.

Beautiful, young lady.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2004-01-15 07:30 PM

Lovely thoughts...good to have them...good to read them...James

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-01-16 11:08 PM

"I would shed a million tears
creating a river of memories
If we part
I can fish them from the river
and conceal them in my heart."

Enjoyed your writing.

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