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Open Poetry #30

By the light of the ocean

Jessie Carstein
Junior Member

since 2004-01-08

Posts 41

0 posted 2004-01-13 06:02 AM

By the sea and the tide,
This path I fly,
Across whale and ocean,
My words cry.

I yearn for the sea,
The tide washes me clean,
I yearn for the man of tide,
But my face is never seen.

I yearn for the loving ocean,
I seek the gentle school of fish,
But on this sand alone
I make this gentle wish…

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2004-01-13 09:45 AM

I enjoyed this very much...I love the water.

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

2 posted 2004-01-13 09:59 AM

This time of year, it is beautiful, cold, and isolated upon the shore, making wishing here a fairly common prayer. I enjoyed this.

McLean

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

3 posted 2004-01-14 08:21 PM

Hello Jessie

This was so very beautiful and so very much enjoyed. I am amazed that there aren't many more replies so I'll put it back to the top where it belongs.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

4 posted 2004-01-15 04:15 PM

I think more people need to read this.

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

5 posted 2004-01-15 04:49 PM

very intriguing write...you had
me from the first line...i would love
to see you add more to this!

take care,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-01-16 11:06 PM

Jessie -- Welcome to Passions. The ocean beckons us -- I don't know anyone who does not feel that, so this poem speaks to the masses.

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