Open Poetry #30 |
By the light of the ocean |
Jessie Carstein Junior Member
since 2004-01-08
Posts 41 |
By the sea and the tide, This path I fly, Across whale and ocean, My words cry. I yearn for the sea, The tide washes me clean, I yearn for the man of tide, But my face is never seen. I yearn for the loving ocean, I seek the gentle school of fish, But on this sand alone I make this gentle wish… |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I enjoyed this very much...I love the water. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
This time of year, it is beautiful, cold, and isolated upon the shore, making wishing here a fairly common prayer. I enjoyed this. McLean |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Jessie This was so very beautiful and so very much enjoyed. I am amazed that there aren't many more replies so I'll put it back to the top where it belongs. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I think more people need to read this. I am in motion |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
very intriguing write...you had me from the first line...i would love to see you add more to this! take care, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Jessie -- Welcome to Passions. The ocean beckons us -- I don't know anyone who does not feel that, so this poem speaks to the masses. |
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