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Ravenwolfvoyager
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0 posted 2003-12-27 01:59 PM


Your beauty is a wonderment to endure,
Your cascading love spreads droplets of treasure forever to behold;
How be thee a lost pearl in the sand?
It is my hearts calling to embellish the warmth of thy gentle hand.

I miss thee, thy vacancy lends a sickness within my beating heart,
The moments between us are so long and yet our destinies only minutes apart;

Grace me with thy presence and of thy caring soul...
I love thee my maiden, it is with thee who hast the strength and power to cause my knees to fold

And you are aspiring to me like the wings of a dove
And so shall you soar and discover the beacon of my love

[This message has been edited by Ravenwolfvoyager (12-27-2003 04:26 PM).]

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Suetang
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1 posted 2003-12-27 04:22 PM


Wow!

This was outstanding and as I am a hopeless romantic, I loved it even more.



"To love, is to receive
a glimpse into heaven"

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

[This message has been edited by Suetang (12-27-2003 04:24 PM).]

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
2 posted 2003-12-27 06:09 PM


Absolutely beautiful.
ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2003-12-27 06:09 PM


Wow!
garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-12-27 06:18 PM


Ravenwolf, this is beautiful...
and, I'm a hopless romantic, too.
You can tell if you've red many of my poems. LOL
Hugs  
Ethel

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Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2003-12-27 06:55 PM


What heart speaks words that my heart can decipher....whose love is a code...sending signals....your S.M.H.....(save my heart)

Maiden am I of the forest of love....my hearts feathers are flying free....

Your poetry takes me to all these journeys...magical..romantic....let thy beacon shine ever so bright..through fog....rain..snow..I can still see it burning ever so brightly...guideing me...

Lady of the forest
~ARH


Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (12-27-2003 06:57 PM).]

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2003-12-27 08:10 PM


Jeff~
It is a refreshing treasure to read you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

Suetang
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7 posted 2003-12-27 11:27 PM


This fine piece deserves more exposure.

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
8 posted 2003-12-28 06:19 AM


Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
9 posted 2003-12-29 05:28 AM


Awwww what a sweetheart you are ...lucky she is the one these words are intended for. Very sweet.
jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
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On the edge of forever
10 posted 2003-12-29 12:09 PM


RWV...

Once again...remarkable!  Thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

iliana
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11 posted 2004-01-16 10:09 PM


Since it's so close to Valentine's Day, I thought I would shoot this back to the top for all the hopeless romantics out there!  Nice.
Suetang
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12 posted 2004-01-16 11:31 PM


Hello Jeff

I agree with Iliana.....this belongs at the top.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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