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wordwizard
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0 posted 2004-01-15 12:26 PM



So many love from a distance
they were hurt in an instant
never heal
never appeal
to find a match is such an ordeal
and a match for what?

Yet others decide to stake life alone
at a quaint cafe with a buttered scone
who observe people that pass by in busy mode
or to spot a famous countryman's abode


There are couples that connect at the neck
one might cruise another on an ocean liner deck,
or may live their lives straight from a shoe
parental dilemma
results of too many children, what can one do?

I keep love at a safe distance, not to get hurt
but love caused by passion has its start and spurt..
I then forget the distance, lest I remain alone
sit in solemn anguish...expect a call on the phone?...

No, I'll be out and about in search again
disappointments have had me trained
better to look so that I may find
someone complementary to my kind.


© copyright 2004 ecrivan



© Copyright 2004 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 2004-01-15 12:45 PM


Hi Martin

A fabulous piece of writing that was so much enjoyed by this reader.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Maki Riddington
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since 2004-01-13
Posts 10
Canada
2 posted 2004-01-15 01:22 AM


Great poem, I really liked this piece.
wordwizard
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3 posted 2004-01-15 09:46 PM


Thanks Sue amd Maki

just purposefully reflecting on overdo rare moments to share   Welcome to Passions Maki



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