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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2004-01-11 04:34 PM


TWENTY OR LESS…#176

Copyright 2004 by:MARK V SHELDON


your lips brush tender
delicious and knowing

wishing me to believe

but my soul whispers
ahead of the ending


You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

© Copyright 2004 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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1 posted 2004-01-11 05:02 PM


Touching something special
Your lips brushed against a surface
Your hips brushed against a surface
Delicious and knowing
Fleeting
Backside swaying knowledge left my room

wishing me to believe

but my soul whispers
ahead of the ending

A door slamming, open, vroom


Dave

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2004-01-11 05:05 PM


Hmmm...  A vision to behold...  (or be held?)

Thanks for the impressions.

-MVS

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http://educate-yourself.org/

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2004-01-11 05:18 PM


MARK,
Interesting has many interpretions.

garysgirl
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4 posted 2004-01-11 05:46 PM


Mark, I know that I've said it before,
but I really do love the way you can put
so much into so few words. Very good writing.  
Hugs  
Ethel

MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2004-01-11 05:52 PM


Sy, that's what keeps these fun to write.  Thanks for stopping by.

Hi Ethel -- thank you kindly for your words which always say much in their own way -- they are appreciated.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2004-01-11 06:30 PM


Mark, your poem reminded me
of these words I once wrote:


A prisoner, I have become
Your kisses, I am weakened to
Surrendering, my lips are yours
Addicted I, to kiss of you.


Happy New Year...
~smiling~
M

MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2004-01-11 06:40 PM


Hi Maureen, and a Wholesome New Year to you!  Ah...  such the addiction...   and so much wisdom therein, no?

Good to be back,

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2004-01-11 06:54 PM


Glad to have you back...always



you inspire...

M

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9 posted 2004-01-11 08:02 PM


Wonderful words here Mark!
Happy New Year..
and it's so good to see you here!
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

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10 posted 2004-01-11 11:48 PM


Just take it one kiss at a time, and enjoy.

It's good to read you again, Mark. Hope this new year finds you healthy and happy.

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11 posted 2004-01-12 12:19 PM


passionat writting. its a goody in my book.
passing shadows
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12 posted 2004-01-12 02:26 AM


sweeeeet!
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13 posted 2004-01-12 09:59 AM


but my soul whispers
ahead of the ending

ah now.. this again leaves the reader to decide...

enjyed Mark..as usual, you do more with a few words than most can with many


MARK V SHELDON
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14 posted 2004-01-12 10:55 AM


Maureen:  

Nancy:  A BIG to you, my Lady, and a wholesome fresh year to you too!

Thank you very much, Kacy -- I will, and the same for you!

Serra_Avatar:  Passion is an essential ingredient to a life well-lived...  Thanks for your impressions.

Dixie -- may it always remain so...

Hi Ron -- thanks for the uplifting thoughts.  As for the decision...  I'd suggest the one with no regrets.   A wholesome new year to you, my friend...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

iliana
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15 posted 2004-01-12 06:16 PM


A thousand and more words can be written about the kiss -- I liked yours!  Mysterious!
JamesMichael
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16 posted 2004-01-13 11:13 PM


Nice writing...James
MARK V SHELDON
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17 posted 2004-01-14 12:25 PM


iliana:  If a picture paints a thousand words, imagine what a kiss can do...  Thanks for the thoughts.

Thank you James, and a wholesome new year to you.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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18 posted 2004-01-14 11:27 AM


love it...
MARK V SHELDON
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19 posted 2004-01-14 11:50 AM


KristieSue:

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Zinsser
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20 posted 2004-01-15 09:40 PM


Now this is great!!!!   I like

How the heck are you?   : )

Connie

MARK V SHELDON
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21 posted 2004-01-15 09:52 PM


Hey there, Connie!   Thanks for the .  A wholesome new year to you.  I'm doing well, thanks, and hope you are too.  Read you soon!

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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