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Saving Sundown
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Saving Sundown |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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Saving Sundown I've seen it and I've heard it a thousand times or two I've watched you carry doubt in it's many shades Those whispers of uncertainty lingering there under your breath Are so much louder then any sound you've ever made... My destination is anywhere that the breeze will move me When on earth I only resided in a single place So, if I can ride these winds now without any regret Then, why should you ever have sorrowfulness on your face... The night is a powerful weight on a soul still grieving And, you're saving sundown to gather what should have been But, if I can look at you with sweet understanding from where I am Then, you must see the truth is our connection between us again... You're saving sundown to find seasons you should have changed When lying your head each night there isn't anything to be sorry for Now, if I'm at peace with the home God's provided me with Then, you must find the same kind living there in yours... Yesterday I was taken and today I still remain in heart And, some tomorrow will guide us together on through Now, if I can find the path to a smile that is finally real Then, just remember me and graciously wears yours, too... The next time you're saving sundown and taking in any pain Vision how I am now resting above that common rain So, hold my hand, one in one, across the sky we once knew And, when it falls don't allow those same waters to touch you... Saundra Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
I sincerely enjoyed reading this Saunni, this a fine piece of work and is truly an inspiration to read as well as heartfelt. Thank you for blessing us with your writes. Thank you. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This was very sweet and felt so gentle. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
It is delicious I would love to see you take the words and make them them reverberate echoing ideas to break the sky Dave |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Saunni~ You grace these poetic pages with talent that is admired~  This is wonderful~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Saunni beautiful! this reaches from deep within! take care, amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Saundra Absolutely Beautiful carrying doubt is a hard thing to rid of I enjoyed every line *s hugs M |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The next time you're saving sundown and taking in any pain Vision how I am now resting above that common rain So, hold my hand, one in one, across the sky we once knew And, when it falls don't allow those same waters to touch you... Still waters run deep, and you make me weep when your heart speaks this way. Lovely poetry, Saunni~ |
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