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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-01-14 10:54 PM



Here

here
the fields
deflect
the flakes
of any
winter worry
and the sun
is clad
in iron
where nothing
can wrinkle it
to foil


© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Kristin Eve
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On, Canada
1 posted 2004-01-14 10:58 PM


where is this beautiful 'here' of which you speak of?
I like this.

"Who you are speaks so loudly...I can hardly hear what you are saying"

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass
2 posted 2004-01-15 01:56 AM


Sounds like paradise...the kind within, regardless of what is on the outside.

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Severn
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3 posted 2004-01-15 02:06 AM


I like this too....simple, clean....

quite strong actually..

K

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Louisiana
4 posted 2004-01-15 04:09 PM


Is there a map? *S* I like this very much!
icebox
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in the shadows
5 posted 2004-01-15 04:15 PM


Perfect!
iliana
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USA
6 posted 2004-01-15 05:01 PM


I think I want to visit you for a while!  .......jo
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2004-01-15 08:56 PM


OneSlick~
Poetess, ... I am sooooooooooo glad to know you through the softness of your thoughts~

Hope you are feeling much better dear lady~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2004-01-15 09:16 PM


Yes...perfect!
Healing hugs.

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
9 posted 2004-01-15 10:45 PM


all I can say is, HOLY..well, you know.
passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2004-01-16 04:18 AM


a beautiful place....must be your heart
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