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Jason Lyle
Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2004-01-16 05:49 AM


Sleek, Black
All chrome and
Horsepower
Sitting at a stoplight
I look over and grin
Come get some

Changes to green
And I let loose
700 horses grab
The street
And I scream
I AM THE BULLGOD

G-forces push
me back,feels like sex
Metallica
Screams through the
Speakers
They understand

0 to 60 in a blink
16 year old in a
Mustang hangs his head
I laugh and rip rubber
Again in third gear
And hit the button
Nitrous

I hit a hard left
Sliding onto my street
Slow it down
Kids play here
And heart racing
I park my minivan
And go inside to see my girls


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Singularity
Junior Member
since 2004-01-16
Posts 10
Sunny California
1 posted 2004-01-16 05:57 AM


You had me until the minivan, bro ;-)

I'm a big street racer myself, though I drive a Dodge SRT-4 with a few custom mods.  Though in all seriousness, that was some pretty good work there, man.  Keep it up.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2004-01-16 06:41 AM


hey you soccerdad
you fool out there
its only temporarily
dont let it bring you down
its only castles burning
just find someone whose
turning
and you will come around

peace,michele

McLean
Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484
state of marital bliss
3 posted 2004-01-16 06:42 AM


Jumping up and down...I LOVE THIS!!!  Minivan I have not, but everything else is a "yes".  This is great and funny and refreshing to see that this person lives inside other parental models.

McLean

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