Open Poetry #30 |
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Love Has Come Home To Stay |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
![]() This picture inspired me to write this poem * * * Beyond the ivy covered window There is a warm and cosy fire Two lovers snuggle close together As the flames of love grow higher For so long she has been waiting For her lover to return Now like the embers in the fire How her love begins to burn He had been away for so long His tender touch she missed Now they reacquaint themselves With a long passionate kiss She looks more beautiful than ever He has waited for so long Asbence made his heart grow fonder His love for her now is so strong Her eyes speak of passion Of a burning deep desire As he lowers her very gently Beside the golden glow of the fire Love has found it's rightful place As they make love where they lay Two hearts sing a joyous song For love's come home to stay * * * "My heart is like a singing bird Whose nest is in a watered shoot My heart is like an apple tree Whose boughs bear the thickest fruit My heart is like a rainbow shell That paddles in a halcyon sea My heart is gladder than all these Because my love has come to me" I am in motion |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
She looks more beautiful than ever He has waited for so long Asbence made his heart grow fonder His love for her now is so strong Her eyes speak of passion Of a burning deep desire As he lowers her very gently Beside the golden glow of the fire Love has found it's rightful place As they make love where they lay Two hearts sing a joyous song For love's come home to stay Sue, this is so beautiful. Thanks for sharing it. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
SO GORGEOUS! |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
"Her eyes speak of passion Of a burning deep desire As he lowers her very gently Beside the golden glow of the fire" beautiful sweet merging of passions and images...I feel uplifted on a dreary day ~C |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Sue .... oh, how I loved this! The thoughts, the images and it is pure delight! Hugs from the frozen North! Marti |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I needed to be heated up, was below zero outside this morning, and my fire got low...but after reading this I warmed right up....Thank you Sue ________ice ><> |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sue, what a wonderfully warm and sweet poem this is. As always, it is a pleasure to read your words. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, you look through the windows of the heart all so well and always write of the beauty and joy mirrored in every true lovers heart! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Suetang Why do you write something that strikes a chord that makes me want to write something from your chord I wouldn't demean your words with the word nice You echo "like a bird on a wire" to a "drunk in the midnight choir" Dave |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your wonderful replies. Dave - I hope it's a good thing that my words strike a chord with you. Thank you for your comment. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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