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Timeless
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Timeless |
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Abe Senior Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 694Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end! 
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TIMELESS The realization of the moment Makes it’s stand, still and quiet Kind of a dream held in limbo In the lonely dark of night. Knowing there could be no more Or at the most, even any less In that moment just flashed past So fast, I couldn’t even guess. Through all time, thought about But, not with much conviction Knowing, someday it would come The finality, of one last, eviction. When you look straight in the eyes That aren’t looking back at you Seems you get some "x-ray vision" That lets you see it, and right, through. All those things that must be done That won’t even go into the time Noticing things that wouldn’t fit Now, seem to fit in, just fine. Sand running through the hourglass All has a place to land, somewhere And when that last grain stops falling I know I’ll know, when I get there. Del "Abe" Jones |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This soul enjoyed your very nicely written observation on the value of time. Thanks you also. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
It is almost a lazy style Talking through a vision Only criticism from me is that you are loosing readers at the beginning of a line with the meaning of the previous line failing to move them and move them I liked it but I love to see you make it really electric regards Dave |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) You are timeless just as we all have that essence in us, in our living faith, and its voice, that speaks of dearest quality! (angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Abe, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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