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Through A Sleepy Forest
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Through A Sleepy Forest |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“THROUGH A SLEEPY FOREST”’ by Bill Charles ~~~~ I walked softly through a sleepy forest in the early morning as the moons light embraced the trees, and a soft breeze flowed through the shadows and touched upon my being in the silence… I heard your whispers as they danced tenderly into my ears embracing me with them, and they sang with the gentleness of heartfelt lullabies from one to the other, their innocence being of a heart as gentle as a child’s sleeping breath… Shadows danced lazily with moonbeams in the dim of the light, and the trees sighed in their silence, for their thoughts became of yours as your breath entered into them and into this essence, this I remember, as I walked softly in the early morning through a sleepy forest… ~~~~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What beautiful imagery here Bill. As soft as a lullaby. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Bill...enchanting and soft. Loved this! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I love the images in this write, Bill. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sigh....this is so beautiful....  Lauren~ ~*~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
so much to be heard among the silence of the trees just lovely as always bill |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
next time, take me with you  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Bill~ This was wonderful!  "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Shadows danced lazily with moonbeams in the dim of the light, and the trees sighed in their silence, for their thoughts became of yours as your breath entered into them and into this essence, this I remember, as I walked softly in the early morning through a sleepy forest… Oh, what a dreamy walk this sounds ike. Beautiful, bill. Hugs  Ethel |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi BC ... stunning write and the imagery is so reminiscent of my stroll at Walden Pond last week. Perhaps we were together in spirit brought there by Henry David Thoreau! Huggles, Marti |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a gentle, peaceful write... thanks for taking us with you on this walk! *S* |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...I don't believe I've ever read a poem of yours so dream-like and wistful. There was the essence of longing hidden in your words. ***Ivy Rose |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BillCharles~ I LOVE reading you !!! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
in the dim of the light, and the trees sighed in their silence, for their thoughts became of yours as your breath entered into them and into this essence, this I remember Oh, these are my kind of thoughts, to remember.... Thank you for this, BC~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bill, oooh, this is yet another keeper! hugs, Chris  "When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! I'm so happy you're back and posting more often, dearest friend, I love sleepy forests and I love smelling the juniper and jasmine in the air on those mornings! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
BC Wonderful visions flowing in your words. Hopefully you will wait to take another walk when the weather is nicer and you won't freeze your buns off. |
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tavern wench Junior Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 44 |
this is almost spiritual.... |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful imagery Bill, wonderful to read you again! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
~*~this just dances~*~ lovely lovely read! Someday I'll fly, Someday I'll soar, |
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