Open Poetry #30 |
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Winters Of Life |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989![]() |
In quiet seek under willows sillhouette comes the soft weeping of tears, releasing fears {shadows of yesterdays linger} Thoughts flow like rain down the weathered face of the past {and I search blindly} through the darkness of night praying for a light to shine to lead the way until the truth I find and the feeling is not that of the coldness of time passing slowly through the winters of life. I'm reaching farther than ever before, but I still can't touch the memory of you. It's better than I could have planned.. it's made me who I am... {Trace Adkins} |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In that reach, your wings spread, y'know... Fly! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
hmmmm...will have to ponder that sweet Lady. Hugs and thanks.... |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Its sad how that which we wish to reach, we can't. And that we want to forget, remains in our view forever... But it is so nice to feel something outside of the cold. I love this.. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
GentleSpirit, sweet one, I hope that the spring of life comes again for you. Nice writing and always enjoyed by me. |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Oh, Gentle Spirit...you will...all the memories are still there. In the silence they come and warm you...I promise. Beautiful words...thank you. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big angel hugs) Awwwwwww, I send many angel hugs your way to help you have many special memories that never seem opaque, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh...this is a keeper...yes |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
and the feeling is not that of the coldness of time passing slowly through the winters of life. I read your words with a gentle acceptance. It is a lovely poem Donna~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and my heart still holds some sadness, only because still..he does not understand, you are all such a blessing to me... thank you so much for listening to me whine...lol. HUGSSSSSSSSSSSS |
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