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Ray's of life
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Ray's of life |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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Cold running threw my viens the ice melting my heart my histerial the fury of it all finally falling into place The eyes of the days slowing piearcing my body like butter melting and peeling my soul Silently I push on wondering and poundering when its going to be better or is this as good as it get's? again this is unedited so i am aware of the errors |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good question; I hope so. Really expressive lines, these: "The eyes of the days slowing piearcing my body like butter melting and peeling my soul" |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
thank you |
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