Short Moods 16 (Unconditional?)

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Short Moods 16 (Unconditional?)

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2004-01-14 02:14 AM

I am an ocean of doubt.
let my strong waves break apart
against the shore of your love.

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill

Masked Intruder

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Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

1 posted 2004-01-14 04:10 AM

I am steadfast,
an iron volcano
that simply will
never burn out.
Let your waves
wash against me
until they are
calm and crystal.
The storm will
always pass;
your paradise
will be found.

Jenn, I am here for you forever. I have more whenever you need it. I'll call you tomorrow. Dream sweet; enjoy the dark. May God embrace you in comfort as you sleep.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2004-01-14 11:28 AM

To find someone who destroys all those doubts... how beautiful. *S*

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-01-14 11:33 AM

Outstanding!

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

4 posted 2004-01-14 02:04 PM

Temptress...Sounds like love to me.
Short & sweet. Enjoyed...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

McLean
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since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

5 posted 2004-01-14 02:40 PM

The symbolism is devine in these particular words. Enjoyed.

McLean

richard taylor
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since 2004-01-13

Posts 136

6 posted 2004-01-14 02:49 PM

Hi Temptress,
I also think this is beautifull, I don't use caps-pun on three line haiku-none haiku though that is just the way I do them. I think this should be published.
excellent.
regards Richard,

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2004-01-14 03:46 PM

This is lovely, Jenn.

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