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Temptress
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0 posted 2004-01-14 02:14 AM


I am an ocean of doubt.
let my strong waves break apart
against the shore of your love.

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill


© Copyright 2004 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-14 04:10 AM


I am steadfast,
an iron volcano
that simply will
never burn out.
Let your waves
wash against me
until they are
calm and crystal.
The storm will
always pass;
your paradise
will be found.


Jenn, I am here for you forever.  I have more whenever you need it.  I'll call you tomorrow.  Dream sweet; enjoy the dark.  May God embrace you in comfort as you sleep.

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2 posted 2004-01-14 11:28 AM


To find someone who destroys all those doubts... how beautiful. *S*
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3 posted 2004-01-14 11:33 AM


Outstanding!
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4 posted 2004-01-14 02:04 PM


Temptress...Sounds like love to me.
Short & sweet. Enjoyed...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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5 posted 2004-01-14 02:40 PM


The symbolism is devine in these particular words.  Enjoyed.

McLean

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6 posted 2004-01-14 02:49 PM


Hi Temptress,
I also think this is beautifull, I don't use caps-pun on three line haiku-none haiku though that is just the way I do them. I think this should be published.
excellent.
regards Richard,

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7 posted 2004-01-14 03:46 PM



This is lovely, Jenn.

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