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Mi Hija, Leah
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Mi Hija, Leah |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Hey, little girl… When did you get so wise? I remember when you clung to me Now we share secrets Grown up secrets I am not sure how you became The wonderful person you are But I am so glad I gave you life Because you did the same for me "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
But I am so glad I gave you life Because you did the same for me Absolutely beautiful Susan! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Susan...I understand this love...you write it so beautifully! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I too understand this kind of love gal....you done good!!! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this beauty reminds me of growing up with my son...children are so marvelously a treasure. But, then you might also be applying this to a love... Never-the-less, this was a very lovely wright and read. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hi, Susan! I've got a daughter, too, who's working on her Masters degree now, and you described exactly how I feel about her! Thanks! jo |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sometimes we see them growing up, so fast and it makes your head spin...wondering if you can keep up.... A very nice expression of love...thanx Susan. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful. Life giving life, this is beauty and truth. Love, Margherita  |
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tainted_love123 Junior Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 11Australia |
Love brings our the best in us.. good write |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
A daughter has a way of breathing life right back into us, and what a treasure she is!!! Coming full circle is a glorious feeling and wonderful time to share. Really loved this Susan~ |
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Leah Caldwell New Member
since 2003-11-26
Posts 4 |
Thankies my mummy, who would have thought that those rough years would bring the best the next. you have a wonderful way of bringing up children even though each one of us had, had such hard times we got through them with flying colors. you gave us the strength we needed in those times of need and For once in my life Im finally happy with things the was they are. and with out a doubt They will become better in the near future Im happy for the new love in your life and it makes me happy every day to see you with a smile on your face. We alwasy knew your heart came to us first. Love you mommy |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You did a wonderful job it would seem with raising that precious daughter Susan. She sounds very very special and appreciative! Hi Leah! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Awww, this is so sweet, Susan, and your Leah sounds like a treasure for sure!! Hugs to both of you,  Ethel |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Susan this is lovely. I bet your daughter is too.  hugs, Chris"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
What a wonderful tribute to your daughter, I presume it is for your daughter. An easy flowing write. Enjoyed! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan Good thoughts, good write, good read. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Wonderful poem of your daughter. Your style always amazes me |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you everyone. And Daughter? You continue to amaze me...I love you so...and was it you that ate all the meat out of the chinese food in the fridge?  "if you won't let me fall for you then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you" ~Dido~ |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I still love this so up it goes |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
I'm so jealous! It's great that you two can share so much. Wonderful to see the connections! McLean |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
How fortunate for you both! And thanks for sharing, this sort of thing can be contagious, you know. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now Susan, I know I saw this the first time around, and could have sworn I left a "thank you" response, but I don't see it... so here it is.  |
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